Hi there. Here’s the first chapter of my book: the prologue. There’s a bit of an explanation afterwards. Please enjoy:






Post Script:
I’m about 3 weeks into full-time writing and illustrating this graphic memoir of mine.
My process is:
- I write, in one session, the main structure for a section (i.e. what happens in the section)
- With the structure sorted, I write a fleshed-out description what should happen, page to page.
- Then I write the “storyboard script”. This includes written narration, dialogue, what pictures to include, how to draw things.
- Then I do a rough storyboard, and mess around with the composition of the scene.
- Then, final illustration: write and draw the thing.
I’m… semi-happy with this prologue. Keeping in mind that one of the themes of this book is “I’ll get better as I go, because you’re seeing me learning on the page”, I’m (mostly) peace with the level of quality here.
Honestly, this isn’t as high-quality as I would like it to be. I’m now about 30 pages further ahead (I’ll release in 2-3 weeks, I think) and I’ve already learned a lot since I finished this prologue a couple of weeks ago. So I have this desparate urge: go back! Add panels to separate scenes! Make everything clearer! Add more texture! Get better at bodies! Aaargh!
But, I committed to myself a while ago: show the learning. Show the mistakes. Show the progress. Don’t go back and cover up your past mistakes.
Painful as it is, I hope that the quality is enough for you to be on board with the reading.
Until next time,
Oscar
It’s really cool to see your thought process and all the work happening behind the scenes. The prologue is interesting and clear as it is. I’d say just keep going—maybe you’ll feel like changing it in a few months, maybe you won’t. No need to worry about it now:)
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wonderful work, i love the authenticity
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